https://www.posetteforever.com/viewtopic.php?f=25&t=1086
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messenger
Monday, 08 November 2004, 06:31 PM

a poem
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Night time torture

As I walk through the vallley of despair, and climb the mountain of lonliness
The mists of chaos confuse my thoughts
I turn and seek to find if one follows me there but no one is to be found
Restlessness invades my body, and I tumble and toss, but to no avail
The sweet slumber of sleep eludes me, and wakefullness abounds
The night sounds echo around my room, each seeming louder than the one before
Screeching tyres, slamming doors and even the sound of someones snores,
I punch my pillow, I try a drink, but nothing works I am still awake,
What did I do to deserve this I cry, my bed now an instrument of torture, the blankets awry,
The sheets full of wrinkles, my mind tortures me with thoughts of things past,
And some not yet done,
And wait, there through the blinds I see....Oh no its the glimmer of sun
For me the night is not yet over, yet the morning has begun
The start of a new day sees me tired and weary, with eyes looking bloodshot and bleary,
But at least a new hope now dawns, maybe tonight I will sleep deep and sound,
And awake tomorrow to greet the dawn with a smile on my face and not a frown.


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Tormie
Monday, 08 November 2004, 10:08 PM


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:clap:  :clap:  :clap:  :bigrinnin: Thank you for having posted something here messenger!! This place was full of webs  8-[ ... I need my little dictionary to translate you poem and I will comment it later  :)


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messenger
Monday, 08 November 2004, 10:19 PM


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your very welcome tormie


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TdaC
Monday, 08 November 2004, 10:32 PM


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Thanks for sharing your poem, it was felt very true and real.  :clap:  :clap:  :clap:  :clap:  :clap:  :clap:  :clap:


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Den Tracy
Tuesday, 09 November 2004, 01:00 PM


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Everyone has had a night or nights  like the one in the poem.
Well written, Angie. :clap: 

There is an abundance of different talents here, to say the very least


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Paul Mon
Tuesday, 09 November 2004, 01:04 PM


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Damn Angie...how did you know I had a sleepless night on Monday?  :clap:  :clap:  :clap:  :clap: Sums it up. Great words :heartbeat:


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RedHawk
Tuesday, 09 November 2004, 01:07 PM


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:clap:  :clap:  :clap: 
I'm not usually a big poetry fan, but I really enjoyed this!
Thanks! :notworthy:


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messenger
Tuesday, 09 November 2004, 04:16 PM


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thanks everyone....gosh paul didn't you know that I know everything.....at least that is what my hubby says... :lol:


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Tormie
Tuesday, 09 November 2004, 06:11 PM


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I enjoied it a lot  :clap: ! Tahnk you Messenger  :)  :)  :) !!


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Ozymandias Jones
Wednesday, 10 November 2004, 03:53 AM


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Well written, captures the moment. 

Thanks for sharing with us  :clap:


