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guiltypleasures
Sunday, 09 May 2004, 01:08 AM

Okay you ask for it (Adult Content)
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[b]Here's a short story I wrote while we ran a bbs out of our home for a friend of mine. This is actually the beginning of a book I want to write (well not the beginning but the inspiration for it) I've put an ending to this one though, if you don't like it, feel free to come to the clubhouse and smack me with a large tuna! lol[/b]

[i][b]Part 1[/b][/i]

It was just about 9 p.m. when SaVannah entered the lounge at Woody's Wonderland. She was dressed to the nine's and when she entered a room it wasn't uncommon for all heads to turn. Her expensive attire was only surpassed by her exquisite beauty. All the town new of SaVannah, as she made a point of being noticed. Her husband also knew of her not so indiscrete desires, but was too often busy with running the town to really care, and he knew she would never really leave him.Tonight SaVannah was looking for a new adventure, one to qualm the emptiness inside her. "Her little game", as she often referred to it.

Slowly she eased herself into a dark and very secluded booth in the back corner of the lounge. The place was still pretty empty, as the band hadn't set up yet. She took notice of the man behind the bar, Fast Eddie was his name, and SaVannah had always enjoyed his amusing humor whenever she was in, but this time she passed on that, as the booth was more secluded for what she wanted that night. After only a few minutes, one of the waiters walked over to her table.

"What would be your pleasure?" the young man asked with a smile.

"My pleasures are many, and you would probably be able to fulfill most of them yourself, but for now, I'll just take a glass of your best wine." He seemed for a moment to blush, but then composed himself, nodded and left for the bar. SaVannah toyed for a moment with thought's of how she might have some fun with him, but decided that wouldn't be necessary, as her plans had already been made. As she waited, she slipped her hand into her purse, pulling out her gold card, along with a folded slip of paper. The waiter returned moments later with her wine. SaVannah looked up and smiled, handing him the card. "Please see that Mr. Hall gets this as soon as possible." With that said, she slipped the note into his hand. He nodded and left towards the door marked private.

Behind the door was a very elegant office belonging to Mr. Hall the manager of Woody's Wonderland. A large mahogany desk cloaked the rear area of the office almost overshadowing the large picturesque window overlooking the grounds.Mr. Hall was seated in a beautiful burgundy leather chair behind the desk, talking on the phone with someone named Tabby. He paused when he heard the knock on the door. "Who is it?" he said in an annoyed voice.

"It's Jake sir, I have something for you." With that Jake opened the door and started to enter.

"I'm busy, come back later!" Woody barked.

Jake nodded, but then added, "I was told to give you this note from a lady in the bar."

"Don't you listen, I'm busy with a lady now! Just leave it on my desk and get out." The waiter placed the note on the desk and left without another word. Mr. Hall resumed his steamy phone conversation with the woman, but glanced over at the note. Curious he opened it, and started to read. For a moment he was quiet. "I'll have to get back to you later Tabby, something very urgent has come up here at the lounge."

"But Woody, I'm important too, and we had plans for the night!" The voice on the other end pleaded.

"I'm sorry doll,, we will just have to postpone them for some other time. Later babe." Woody slammed down the phone and read the note again, as if he wasn't sure if it was true or not. Woody had had a thing for SaVannah for some time now, but because her husband ran the town, he thought better of making trouble. Even so now he was too curious to let this go, and decided to find out what this lovely lady wanted of him.

[b]Read on for part 2 if you want [/b]


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guiltypleasures
Sunday, 09 May 2004, 01:14 AM

Re: Okay you ask for it (Adult Content)
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[b]Part 2[/b]

SaVannah was almost finished with her wine when she looked up to see Mr. Hall standing beside her. She smiled and nodded for him to take a seat across from her. As he sat down he he looked her over and grinned.

"You look incredible lady! What brought you in tonight, and how is it that I can help you?" Woody asked with a slight twinkle in his eyes.

Woody Hall was a very eligible bachelor, and the women seemed to flock around him on a nightly basis. He was always in the company of someone, but most of all SaVannah was the one that had always intrigued him the most. Maybe it was because he knew he could never have her, tonight though, he decided to let the events take care of themselves.

"Thank you Woody, and you look as handsome as usual also." She reached across the table and slide her fingers across his hand letting them linger for just a moment before placing them back in her lap. "I'm here because I wanted to talk to you about tonight."

Woody looked puzzled for a moment, then asked, "What about tonight? I didn't know you were even going to be here tonight, not that I'm complaining", he threw in with a slightly boyish grin, that SaVannah had always found so attractive about him.

"I know that Woody dear, I wanted to make it a surprise, and by the look on your face, I'd have to say mission accomplished! Buy me another one of these and I'll tell you what the night has in store for you." She pushed her empty glass closer to him, and smiled.

Woody motioned to the waiter to bring another glass of wine and sat back and studied the lady across from him. He wasn't sure what to make of these turn of events. What was her plan he wondered, but he knew by the look in her eyes, and that damn little smile on her face that it was going to be interesting at the very least. Interesting enough to hang up on a sure thing with Tabby.

A few minutes later the waiter returned with the wine. SaVannah looked up at him with a hit of a gleam in her eyes, and then she sighed and picked up the glass. "Thank you", she said in a low breathy whisper, and took a sip of her wine.

As the waiter left, Woody asked, "Ok what's going on in that kinky little mind of yours anyway?" But she was looking over at the bar, and seemed not to notice what he had said. Then slowly she turned to look at him.

"It's opening night at "The Motel", and I have a room reserved just for you."

Woody looked curiously puzzled now, and just sat there staring at her, then he spoke. "A room tonight? Am I to presume that you will be there also?"

But of course silly, it wouldn't be as much fun for you if I wasn't there," she said with a slight giggle. As she finished her drink she glanced at her watch, it was now almost 10p.m. "We had better get going while the night is still young."

Woody smiled at her and nodded as the tow of them stood, "I'll meet you there Woody, I have my car." As she left she turned and blew him a kiss, then headed out the door to her little red Maserati.


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guiltypleasures
Sunday, 09 May 2004, 01:20 AM

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[b]Part 3[/b]

About a half hour later Woody entered room 69 of "The Motel". It was dark inside except for the candles burning in several places. The room was one of the largest in the place, with a beautiful view of the ocean. To the left was a well stocked wet bar, and to the right was a large hot tub. Across the room was the bed, a large heart shaped water bed on a pedestal which seemed to be revolving slowly. On the other side of the bed was the French doors which opened up to a balcony overlooking the ocean. As Woody walked farther into the room, he saw SaVannah lounging on the bed, he also noticed that she had changed into something very sexy.

"Would you mind making us a drink please Woody?" She asked as she pointed to the bar behind him. Woody nodded and turned back to the bar and began to mix up a couple of drinks. As he did this SaVannah slowly stood and walked over to the French doors and out onto the balcony. "It's a full moon tonight, did you notice?" Woody looked up from the bar, and saw her standing there. She was breathtaking in her black lace teddy, and the heels made her long legs look even more enticing. She had let her long blonde hair loose, and the wind was gently tossing it from her face. He started to answer her, but she continued.

"I love the smell of an ocean breeze, just look at how the moonlight seems to dance on the water as the waves crash upon the rocks. We should take a walk on the beach around sunrise don't you agree?"

Finished mixing the drinks, Woody walked over to where she was standing and handed her the glass, "So I'm going to assume that you and I are spending the night here?"

SaVannah just looked at him and smiled. They stood at the balcony doors for several minutes more, looking out at the sea when suddenly SaVannah placed her glass down and took him into her arms and started to whisper into his ear. "I want you Woody, and I think you have been wanting me also." She could feel her answer without any words spoken, as she pressed her body harder against his. 

Woody now took her into his arms and began to kiss her. Her lips were as sweet as the nectar on the honey suckles that grew in the meadow he played in as a boy. Never had he felt as much passion for a woman as he was feeling now. This was more than lust, more than anything he had ever known, and he knew this night would be one he would never forget.

As their kiss lingered he picked her up and carried her to the bed. She lay there looking upon his masculine features as he undressed and slid into the bed with her. Taking her into his arms once more, he began again kissing her between his moans of ecstasy....

If your still reading, the ending will be posted in a bit... :)


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Den Tracy
Sunday, 09 May 2004, 03:08 AM


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Hey, this is pretty damn good...

 :popcorn: :Prrr:    :popcorn:   :forthosewhothinkyoung: 

You said : "If your still reading, the ending will be posted in a bit..." 
Nope, nobody's gonna read this ... nope.   :prrr: 
Hmmm...  :prrr:  :prrr:  :prrr:  :-k 

Motel room "69", Woody appears to have a "woody" of his own...  :lol: 

(Den comes to the end of part three and begins to  :protest:)
Knowing that this content is right up Tormie's alley and soon
the scenes of endless slobbering will begin...

Good thing that I'm wearing my trenchcoat in the porno theatre...    :lol: 


 :whistle:  :whistle:  :whistle:


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Den Tracy
Sunday, 09 May 2004, 03:13 AM


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For the record, I do not recall asking for any content like this...
It must have been lonesome Tormentor... or that shark biscuit, down under guy, Ozy :bigrinnin:


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Bonnie
Sunday, 09 May 2004, 03:45 AM


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Den, you're such a moron.  :roll: 

This has the makings of a Harlequin Romance novel.  :bigrinnin: 
Sounds like a typical Saturday night over here.  :lol: 
Well, not really.

I'd settle for the lust  :lol: 
Perhaps I shall seek out my love drone (If he's still awake)  :lol:  :lol:  :lol: 

Seriously though, the story moves along well.


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guiltypleasures
Sunday, 09 May 2004, 03:56 AM


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lol, yeah Den, this is just a little romantic story, nothing porn here.. or is there...hmmmm, guess we'll just have to wait till I post the ending won't we  8-[  :-k  :whistle:


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Tormie
Sunday, 09 May 2004, 06:32 AM


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:oops:  :oops:  :oops:  :oops:  :oops:


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Angela
Sunday, 09 May 2004, 06:33 AM


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:bigrinnin:  :bigrinnin:  :bigrinnin: !!!


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Posy
Sunday, 09 May 2004, 06:34 AM


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[-X  [-X  [-X Angela, you've better things to do, for example you've to clean the cats litter !


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Angela
Sunday, 09 May 2004, 06:37 AM


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:-#  :-#  :-#  ](*,)  ](*,)  ](*,)  :x  :x  :x


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guiltypleasures
Sunday, 09 May 2004, 06:42 AM


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It's okay Angela I'll help you, I'll read you the rest of the story while you clean the litter boxes :)


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guiltypleasures
Monday, 10 May 2004, 06:43 PM

Re: Okay you ask for it (Adult Content)
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[b]Part 4 (The ending)[/b]

Might want to stop now if your offended easily  :oops: 

Really, this might not be suitable for all memebers...


Okay, well don't say I didn't warn you....


Are you sure you want to continue on to the last part????

You might want to stop here and go back and read part 3 again, so it will all be fresh in your memory once you have given great thought to reading on to part 4...................................................... Okay, well I can't say anymore...so without anymore warnings, I give you the ending of the Wonderland Fantasy  :pray: 
 ](*,)  :-k  [-(  [-X  #-o  :pray: 

".....Ann! Can you hear me? Log off that damn computer and stop fantasizing!" A grouchy voice said, which seemed to come out of nowhere, but she knew who it was, and how her "game" for the night was over. She frowned and logged off, but she knew tomorrow night the fantasy would continue.  :whistle: 

 :lmao:  :bigrinnin:


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Tormie
Monday, 10 May 2004, 08:29 PM


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No problem GP, we are all adults here !! In any cases if someone is disturbed from GP porn... *ehm* -light erotic- story I can put a password on it and release it on demand, but I think it's not the case...

( I limited Angela's access )


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JanReinar
Monday, 10 May 2004, 08:38 PM


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:lmao:  :lmao:


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guiltypleasures
Monday, 10 May 2004, 08:48 PM


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lol, I think you missed my joke tormie...I put the warning on the ending as a joke, cause the ending is a joke to the story...not what they were expecting as an ending I'm sure (looks at Den and shakes her finger at him...you have a dirty mind mister  :lmao:  :bigrinnin:  :lmao:  :dancing: )


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Tormie
Monday, 10 May 2004, 08:54 PM


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I've not red the ending yet  :oops:  :oops:  :oops: ...

Ehm... the language barrier  :oops:  :oops:  :oops:


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Paul Mon
Tuesday, 11 May 2004, 11:13 AM


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:clap:  :clap:  :clap:


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guiltypleasures
Tuesday, 11 May 2004, 02:08 PM


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Well I didn't want to have to tell you this Tormentor, but Angela is the one who helped me write this...she did all the steamy parts  :bigrinnin:  :lol:  :lmao:


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Tormie
Tuesday, 11 May 2004, 03:08 PM


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:-s  :-s  :-s  :-k  :-k  :-k


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guiltypleasures
Tuesday, 11 May 2004, 03:13 PM


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:lmao:


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tda42
Tuesday, 11 May 2004, 07:19 PM


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Yah but you got to hand it to her she is a good writer right. :bigrinnin: You know good 8-[ ..................writer? :-s I mean .......... :oops: well.........You know there is simply not enough deodorant for this conversation. :? Ok Ok I know, go to your room. :x


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guiltypleasures
Tuesday, 11 May 2004, 07:42 PM


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:lmao:  :bigrinnin:


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messenger
Wednesday, 12 May 2004, 07:06 AM


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:lmao:  :lmao:  :lmao: very nicely done GP and Angela...great twist to the ending ...just up my street.


