https://www.posetteforever.com/viewtopic.php?f=25&t=1562&p=23264#p23264 ----------------------------------- Visitor Friday, 22 July 2005, 03:27 AM ----------------------------------- If you has red all of the nonsence in the first part , here is the second one. The second part shows the same community 1200 years later, and they're not on earth anymore because of the radiation. They're on the moon in an utopical country named Arcadia (I know there was a country with the same name in the antiquity , but I just like it a lot.) The official language of Atcadia was sellen , the latin essence language. During these 1200 years money had totally lost its value , because there was no place you can buy something from. Also there was no monetary in Arcadia. Everything was produced by machines in the best possible quality and every citizen had the right to receive latin essence every single day , they received also a house , food , clothes and everything other they wanted. I guess this is highest level of communism , which was never reached. There was also no political parties , only independant candidates. Thanks to the latin essence everyone had the necessery basics to become engineer , doctor , even politician. To become an independant candidate you have to become restatur first , a title given for making revolutionary/ interesting projects and suggestions in interest of the society. And another bonus , there was no wars , the country was only one , no weapons (except kitchen knives :) ) and no racism (acradians didn't even know they own origin and everyone suffered from some inherited disease , to kill the "weak" ones ment to kill all your people). The unpleasent work was done by machines , there wasn't AI just machines. So everything was just great , the perfect country , but nothing lasts forever. One day an odl-fashioned spaceship (renaining these from the Global times) arrived in Old Savena (an old territory near Arcadia which wasn't populated any more). The ship's name was "Hope" and the people who arrived were obviosly from earth and later were called "lakretians" after their leader's name Lakretii Emonsilis ("emonsilis" means "eternal" in lakretian dialect of sellen). Their technology wasn't so developped as the arcadian , but their forefathers had something to do with the arcadian's forefathers because they spoke another version of the sellen language who was later called " lakretian sellen" . They just had the same idea to establish a country as the arcadians' forefathers did but they didn't expected to find one. So the arcadian current president Imertii Ternibilis , proposed to the lakretian leader to give his people food , latin essence , thecnology , and after a short period of time to "integrate" them in the arcadian society. Emonsilis accepted everything except the last one. I believe I'll have to tell more about this guy. Supposing lakretians were a tribe , if it was so Emonsilis should be the shaman and the god of that tribe , also he should be the one who's responsible about the food , the doctor , the hunter , just everything , because he actually did everything , the idea to establish a country on the moon was also his. Lakretians became lazy they was used somebody else to do what they'll have to do or to tell them what to do , by the way they were also starving because of the bad conditions on earth and often ate dead bodies. Even the country which Emonsilis planned to establish was named after him : Lakretia. He was a natural dictator and the country itself. Arcadian government realized that if there was another country after this country developped there would be problems and quarells about territories, also arcadians would have to create a monetary in order to trade with Lakretia. They saw all this as a degradation which would end to the level to the Global times and probably create a new DFA. During the centuries arcadians were developped too much compared to the lakretian tribe. They thinked they're the only ones who survived , the only intelligent beings in univers and they liked that status too much to loose it. There device was : "God died after DFA , now we are God!" and the arcadian government decided to do everything posssible to prevent Emonsilis from creating a country. Emonsilis also was smart enough to understand that even if he had Lakretia , Arcadia would be still the great power and probably would be more or less controled by the arcadian goverment. The only way go give his people an independant country was to destroy Arcadia , in other words , to cause DFA one more time. The arcadian government insisted to integrate lakretians , but Emonsilis also knew that if lakretians lived in Arcadia they should be a minority and since there was no minority in Arcadia before and arcadians didn't know how to treat minorities. Arcadian government also refused to make the lakretian sellen dialect an official language , because during the years arcadian writers developped and enriched the sellen , so the lakretian dialect looked to them poor and uncivilized. After several discords Emonsilis gave an ultimatum to Arcadia by making a little demonstration . He invaded the Argentum (in latin silver) square which was the most important place in Arcadia (the president's house and the parliament were there) with "Hope" and a dozen of starving angry lakretians who broke some statues and killed some arcadian citizens. Ternibilis was so shoked that he just watched the whole scene from the balcony and sis nothing. Of course arcadians were unsatisfied of this and required his retirement immediately. In response to the demnstrtions Ternibilis decided to "terminated" aka to kill the lakretians leader. If the whole lakretian tribe relied only on one person the best way to destroy it was to remove that person. So the arcadian engineers created the "diskrutia" - a sort of latin essence which cause very painful death for less than 2 weeks. The diskrutia attacked the consciousness and the body of the victim causeing hallusinations and loss of consciousness for no reason. The whole process of creating the diskrutia took them 6 months , then they poisoned Emonsilis' latin essence with it and delived it to Old Savena. The result was almost nul , Emonsilis survived. Then the engineers get in panic and started to talk nonsence like : "It's a pure evel , that's why the diskrution didn't kill him!" . There was of course logical explanations to this fenomen a) lakretians had survived terrible living conditions and many diseases , so their organisms were stromger and b) arcadian engineers did such a thing for a first time and hadn't tested it on human being so it was possible to did something wrong. Ternibilis was angry and ordered the engineers to do it " in the old way". The next 6 months they were constructing a gun. I know it may sounds ironic but there were no guns in Arcadia and teaching chosen persons how to use it. Finally one of them shot Emonsilis before the eyes of the half of the lakretian people during a speach. Obviously they chsoed the worse time to do it , and it became even worse because Emonsilis had a dauther Avelia ( in lakretian sellen "destiny") and all of the spectators heard her screaming from the tribune. Later she get insane. Lakretia put an end to all affairs with Arcadia and the diskrutia rested in the arcadian territory. Soon people started to use it for personal revenge and that made arcaian government to legalize the eutanasia. There was no war but the both countries falled into decadence. After several years they were both divided into smaller countries and then even they divided since all this came to the Global times' situation. The perfect upotic Arcadia didn't exist anymore and there were local conflicts about territories and privileges. After all some scientists discovered that there's no radiation on earth any more and most gevernments ask themselves : "What are we doing still here?". Then they went back to the earth and establish new states. Only some old arcadian aristocracy staied in the ex Arcadia. So in the end of the writing we have an alternative version of the Global times and probably a new possibility for another DFA. What's the moral? Who's fault was all this? Well I wanted not to create "good" and "bad" characters so I don't know It depents of the point of view.