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#1  Tormie 07 Dec 2007 22:49

Can someone please check what is writing Nik in short sotires... I've some "language barrier" limit    and I need your opinion
 




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#2  ahjah 07 Dec 2007 23:33

They seem o.k., a bit confusing, but my english is not too good, either
 




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#3  Tormie 07 Dec 2007 23:34

Esperanto ?
 




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#4  Tormie 08 Dec 2007 01:04

Ok then he looks like a nice person, and leahman too...
 




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#5  Whazizname 08 Dec 2007 08:34

Nik's story "Fast Forward" is a Sci Fi adventure.

{It begins at the scene of an attempted carjacking/ robbery; the protagonist successfully defends himself, then calls for assistance.
He learns in the hospital that he has lost some of his memory. The story ends with him and his "liason" formulating a plan to design a faster way for him to recover his lost memories.}


Nik's story "Bad Dream" is a Sci Fi Fantasy.

{ Apparently a Genie appears in the protagonist's lab/ workshop to recharge it's powers; then attmpts to repay his kindness by granting a wish.}



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