I hope they make it out of this one...
(I can't look).
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Chromium Old Timer
 
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01 Mar 2013 17:54
_______________ I've found that to do well with any figure you really need to have a passion for that figure, ...and I hope you develop that passion for yours.  |
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Endosphere Not Too Shy To Talk
 
Joined: September 2008 Posts: 75 |
05 Mar 2013 18:41
She woke him up in the nick of time. I like the way you're telling the story so far, and at this particular point breaking into two action sequences at once is a compelling technique to keep the sense of excitement high.
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