Joined: April 2003
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Location: detmold/germany
07 Jun 2004 02:13
Looks a quite exactly how I used to end up all day in my early years. Alcohol is a real devil, but I´m clean and sober for 14 years by now never want to live like that again [-o<
this render catches the mood very well =D> =D> =D>
Joined: November 2003
Posts: 2551
Location: Tennessee, The Great Polecat State
07 Jun 2004 02:20
Boy I'll say! He is also going to see an awful lot of the great porcelain god in the morning. Not to mention the echo of somebody telling him how he shouldn't have substituted the ginger ale for the wine.
_______________ Two wrongs don't make a right.
But six left turns will get you around the block
and back in the driveway again.
Joined: June 2003
Posts: 1991
Location: Southern Oregon Coast
09 Jun 2004 02:55
Very powerful feel to this, the way you posed him nicely and the lack of background in this really gives it more feel to it as it draws you to the scene. =D>
_______________ I long to accomplish a great and noble task, but it is my chief duty to just try and keep control over this group of bozo's at the Nut house errr...Clubhouse! --Guilty Pleasures Chief of Bozo's
never want to live like that again [-o<
He is also going to see an awful lot of the great porcelain god in the morning. 
Not to mention the echo of somebody telling him how he shouldn't have substituted the ginger ale for the wine. 
